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The Black Fox Alchemist (FMA OC)

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Thorn Circle of Life by 22xander



CHARACTER PROFILE: Reynard


Basic Info


Name: Reynard *insert pun on experiment here*
Nicknames/Aliases: Black Fox Alchemist

Gender: Male
Species: Human Chimera (Fox)
Ethnicity: Amestrian

Age: He's sixteen, he looks about twenty physically for a variety of reasons and has no idea of his real age.
Base World:  
FMA Version:  
Works they appear in:  Black Fox Alchemist



Background Basics:



Date of Birth: *unknown* (I really don't know the dates...)
Place of Birth: One of the remenits' labs


Residence(s): An apartment in Central, it is a small one room thing where all the walls are covered in bookshelves except for the kitchen aria for safety. His other furniture includes only the amenities, his writing desk, and a bedroll. Off from the main room is a bathroom with a shower and toilet.
Occupation (Job): State Alchemist/ in training
Education: studying Biochemistry and alchemy,

Sexual Orientation: Pan
Relationship status: single


Appearance:


Hair: Black
Eyes: deep, dark, blue
Skin: pale
Height: about 5'11"
Weight: about 170lbs
Body(shape): Thin, lithe, a little bit oddly balanced
Scars/Tattoo/Markings(s): He has the tail of a fox which seems imperfectly melded to him, leading to a line of fur that runs up his spine to near the base of his neck. He has an alchemical symbol on the back of his neck, which is more advanced then his crude mutation alchemy. On the back of one of his hands is a much cruder symbol carved into it. This is a bit crude, but apropriate I think:Cude alchemical by 22xander


Style: He dresses in a long black button up trench coat that hides his tail and back, over a basic gentleman's outfit. Think a black silk vest over plain white dress shirt and a plain grey trousers, with long lace up boots alla combat boots.


Personality:


Overall:

Goals/Dreams/Drive: Reynard is driven forward by the goal to make himself a viable species as he feels that he shouldn't be banished as an abomination. He wants to become the propagator of an entire race, to damn with the consequences, and he'll do what he has to to make it viable.
Beliefs: Reynard believes in justice, that those who have done wrong should be punished. The one crime he feels is truly unforgivable is causing others pain unnecessarily.


Likes: Animals, bio-alchemy, chimera, anything he thinks
Dislikes: Hypocrites, people who cause pain


Personality Strengths: A strong sense of mostly sound morals, strong willed in his goals.
Personality Flaws: He can be overly impulsive, mostly over his sense that pain should not be given lightly.

Interests/Hobbies: Vivisection, dissection, mutation of small creatures for experimental evidence. As time goes on he will get interested in things like specalative fiction and old religion.

Practical Attributes:



Skills/abilities: Bio-alchemy, Magnetic combat sense
Weaknesses: The pain of bio-reset, his weakness in other alchemical arias, and his base-set appearance physically. Mentally he has trouble distinguishing the correct amount of action to create his desired reaction, often overdoing it in battles and such and experiencing excruciating pain because of it.

Fears: Loosing his memory again, if he does then he might just loose all of his progress.
Relationships:


Family: Sibling experements (um... they include: one who is mostly about automail, a sealed soul who's weapon is also a sealed soul (I need to work on these) and more?)
Freinds: Comander Dead-eyes (guy who finds him), maybe some people in the (revised?) state alchemist program, some comrads, an undetermaned parnter asigned to keep him out of trouble.
Love Interest/Interests: None as of the begining certainly, probly none for a while...
Enemies: The remnants (the secrete organisation of unfunded former military scientists that created him and his siblings.)




ALCHEMIST INFO:


Alchemist Title: The Black Fox Alchemist

Alchemy Abilities: He uses his alchemy to manipulate his own flesh, giving himself weapons and the like. The problem with this ability is that even though he can change the things quickly it takes a long painful time for it to fade, longer the farther away it is from his natural state.
Alchemy they Specialize in: Bio-alchemy
Alchemy Education: He's being trained in alchemy, and has been for several years.
Alchemy Skill Level: Moderate, virtually a novice in most arias but fairly advanced specifically in bio-alchemy




CHIMERA INFO:


Creation: Mostly failed, but on the level of Bido instead of Nina
Animal they are combined with: Fox
Abilities this gives them: High balance and a magnetic targeting system (Foxes have been proven to have a sort of magnetic sence, which they use for hunting. It is not known the exact method, but they do know that is magnetic. He gets it from that, and... well he isn't extra strong like most, although he might have an increased healing factor like they all do.)

Misc:


Fun Facts: I wrote this all in the span of a really hectic day so... I will take any (legitimate) criticism to heart. But I wont hear anything about his morphology, OK, you find a better way to figure out his unique targeting system hmm?

Quotes: (if any...)'

~We... We are the next evolutionary step. The Human chimera, the chimera in general, if we can breed true then we are the future.

~ The prospect of breeding true is the real problem as no chimera have been shown to breed true, but this could simply be a problem with the small pool of specimens that were tested.

Story/Backstory: Reynard's family was one that had been designated a science resource by the military before the fall of Bradley, but why was never explained. Since the two humans, a male and a female, seemed to have no mind of their own the researchers were planing on useing them for bio-material but when they began to mate a better idea came to them. They were physically perfect, and their offspring would likely be good for tests on childhood human alchemy and other projects, and it became painfully obvious that this was going to be incredibly valuable to them when Homunculus and his children failed. They distributed the specimens among them and continued their dark reurch with this breeding pool as their main focus while occasionally using a vagrant they catch.
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Karasunokazu's avatar
Hi! You've submitted this bio to FMAdesuification for critique. At the moment there are so many "unknowns" and gaps here, that it is impossible to give you a decent critique on this character.

What I would suggest is that you fill in all the gaps and resubmit it. If you have left gaps because these are supposed to be mysteries to your fanfic readers, you still need to put them in to his bio, otherwise we can't really give you much feedback. If you are super-paranoid about giving spoilers to your story then maybe you could submit the "unknowns" in a note to the group.

If you have left them because you yourself don't know, then you need to figure those things out!